dang...i don't want to sound rude but what is taking so long 4 the next chapter i really love this story hope u update soon
Author's Response: Sorry. I have had major writer's block, and the next chapter is not coming easily. Plus... life tends to get in the way. I'll get it up soon, I hope.
im really lovin the story...mozy is my favorite of all the bad guys..i really hope u update ASAP
Author's Response: Thanks Jess. I'm working on it... it's hard for me during the summer. Next chapter should be up soon, however.
Wow! It's very dramatic! It's a bit more mature than the norm, but you handle it expertisely! The suspense is intense! On to Etapa Dos!
Author's Response: Thanks Meesh! I'm glad you think that I am handling it well... although, w/ our new project, it may be a lil' while before it gets updated. But it is *so* worth it!
Wow! How in the world do you come up with such *awesome* story plots?! I envy you write now, you know that?! LOL
Author's Response: I daydream, ALOT, that's how. Lol. I'm glad that you are enjoying how the story is going. I hope I can keep you just as interested in the future.
Wow! You're brave! Writing in those passionate scenes in your story. It's always good to do a different style of writing. It makes you flourish and improve as an writer.
Author's Response: Thank you Mariposa. I do realize it's a bit more risque than my other stories, but I figured that it was time for a change. I am still,however, trying to keep it in a series motif style of writing, so that people don't like uprise against me. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you like the minor changes that have occured in my writing.
Hmm..this is different from your other stories...but I loved it! I mean it's not like Al and Jas wouldn't do stuff like that. Anyway great chapter, update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, this story is a bit mature than my other ones. I'm growing up a bit, and I figured it would start to show in my stories at some point. And SUPRISE, here it is. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story also.