Reviews For The Switch
Reviewer: code4destruction Signed
Date: 06/06/09 - 10:19PM
Title: The Switch
a really good short story ^^ it seems a bit too fast paced though. perhaps it's because of the use of dialog to explain instead of narration? like Aladdin having just returned from the Citadel, I would have liked to read Aladdin's actual reaction to that rather than his stated reaction. but on a whole, i can see this was well thought out and prepared ^^
you kept them in character wondrously!
poor Moze. better luck next time eh chap?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
I just opened up an account on www.fanfiction.net, and I'm cleaning up and resubmitting some of my old stories there. I can let you know when I put this one up and will definitely take your review into account when i do!
~Meesh <3
Reviewer: Rebecca 2 Anonymous
Date: 03/20/06 - 09:39PM
Title: The Switch
Pretty good story!
Reviewer: Princess_Thalia Signed
Date: 03/12/05 - 03:43PM
Title: The Switch
this is really good i agree with mystic meg about the longer thing buit apart from that it was really good! (maybe a bit more of genie?)
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, I think I may have rushed the ending a bit, I agree. I felt that this story went well without Genie, but I agree it would have been more interesting if Genie had done more. Maybe I'll update it when I'm back from my brief fanfic break!
Reviewer: MysticMeg Signed
Date: 11/11/04 - 01:03PM
Title: The Switch
This story was very good. I liked how you made it adventerous, and there were some good times of suspense. This story could of definetly been longer and filled with alot more detail of the plot, but the way you made Sadira and Mozenrath interact with eachother was awesome. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing it, and I really appreciate you leaving a review!