This story had a nice story plot, but it needed to be acted out a little more. There needed to be more action and description. Plus, Genie could not have stayed in one shape the whole time, and Mozenrath is not so easily beaten. Plus the characters did not follow their usual personas. I do admire the love they portrayed through Aladdin and Jasmine however, and the plot of the story was amazing. If this author works on going a little more in depth, she will be one of the best story writers I have ever heard of.