goooooood goooooood keep going
Oh MY God!! Sweet chapt gurl!!! Keep it up!! (Seriously)
Author's Response: awww...thanks. hope you like the next one as well ;)
Great chapter so far! It's giving me chills at the thought of waking up in a dungeon and being told you are going to be killed by some one you don't know... LOL!!
Author's Response: yeah me too! lol. thanks for the reviews Starz!
Yay! U updated! I love the way you portray Al and Jas,very in character and well done! Update soon!
Author's Response: thanks ;) hope to update soon!
I hope Aladdin kicks Micheal's butt!! Lol!!
Author's Response: lol~me too ;) he certainty deserves it!
Your story is really good so far!! Keep the chapters commen!!
Author's Response: lol~ hey thanks for the review :)
What a cruel thing!! I have to read the next chapter! lol. Great story so far!!
Author's Response: thanks Starz! reviews like this really encourage me to write more :)
Uh, just a questionare Aladdin and Jasmine the parents of Laurel?
Author's Response: oh no~ sorry for the confusion. laurel is from another kingdom, but that will be explained in the next chapter, right now aladdin and jasmine don\'t know about her...but i hope that it will make since in chapter 2!
Wow...a very strong beginning. I felt like I was right there with Laurel the whole time! And best of all,u left me wondering what's going to happen next.
Update soon!
Author's Response: thanks Storywriter 92~ definitely what an author likes to hear! lol