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Reviewer: Starz Signed Date: 09/29/06 - 05:10PM Title: Chapter 10: Darkness

Why haven't I read this sooner? Keep it up!! It's good!!

Author's Response: lol..thanks for the review Starz!

Reviewer: Sephiroth's Girl Anonymous Date: 09/09/06 - 12:10AM Title: Chapter 9: Simple Instructions

I like what I'm seeing thus far. Mozenrath in any dominating position is needless to say hot! There are so many possibilities...
PLZ UPDATE!! :D

Author's Response: lol. thanks for the review...i must admit he is the most attractive of disney villians...

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 07/27/06 - 06:26PM Title: Chapter 7: Jewel of Paradise

Oooh...ur adding Aladdin to the story! Awesome! Now things will really heat up...

Author's Response: thanks StoryWriter92 for your review :)

Reviewer: SweetApple Signed Date: 07/26/06 - 05:35PM Title: Chapter 6: Safe?

The evil "You'll pay" never gets old^_^ I hope you wright some more LOL

Author's Response: Thanks! it\'s always nice to get reviews like this :)

Reviewer: Desertbloom92 Anonymous Date: 07/24/06 - 10:47PM Title: Chapter 5: A City Beyond the Horizon

yay! but this "yay" doenst seem to last too long cause I know what mozenrath's actions ganna be .

~DB92

Author's Response: yeah Mozenrath definitely has something devious up his sleeve! lol

Reviewer: DesertBloom92 Anonymous Date: 07/24/06 - 11:12AM Title: Chapter 4: Escape

oh yeah! jasmine ..I love her! what a spirt and courge there! I hope this can get to a part she can control not just being draged from one place to another so now its getting ...very goood !! but its not the last of mozenrath yet .huh?



~DB92

Author's Response: I love her character too DB92! I agree, she's very strong on her own! yep, it's heading in that direction :) lol of course not! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 07/24/06 - 09:10AM Title: Chapter 4: Escape

GO JASMINE!!! Man that girl's got guts! She just doesn't quit,does she? Update soon!

Author's Response: No~ course not! that\'s one thing i love about her character- she\'s strong and not afraid to fight!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 07/23/06 - 09:59PM Title: Chapter 2: Wishing for the Impossible

*gulp* Very interesting...I accidently read chapter 2 and 3 backwards,lol Anyway,I LOVE it so far! YOU. MUST. UPDATE!

Author's Response: lol~ thanks StoryWriter92, always nice to hear from a fellow writer! lol

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 07/23/06 - 09:57PM Title: Chapter 3: New Lands

Oh,gosh...but yay! More Moze! I love him so much,even though he's pure evil!

Reviewer: StoryWriter92 Signed Date: 07/23/06 - 09:54PM Title: Chapter 1: New Rules, New Life

Oh,gosh...how have I not read this yet?! I'm SO sorry! Love it so far...now on to chapter 2!

Reviewer: Desert bloom92 Anonymous Date: 07/23/06 - 03:20PM Title: Chapter 2: Wishing for the Impossible

SRY!that last review i posted was for chapeter 3 not 2 ..sry bout that

Reviewer: DesertBloom92 Anonymous Date: 07/23/06 - 03:17PM Title: Chapter 2: Wishing for the Impossible

why dose Moz want her?!Mozenrath can be creepy like always.

~DB92

Author's Response: i won\'t give it away! lol yeah but he\'s such a good villian! lol

Reviewer: SweetApple Signed Date: 07/23/06 - 06:14AM Title: Chapter 2: Wishing for the Impossible

AH not mozenrath. LOL he is starting to scare me now. I had I dream about him he is becomeing a night mare AHHHH

Author's Response: lol~ he is quite the villian i must say, but as frightning as he is i think he is one of aladdin\'s best enemies!

Reviewer: Desertbloom92 Anonymous Date: 07/22/06 - 06:03PM Title: Chapter 2: Wishing for the Impossible

OMG! mozenrath! this is ganna be so intresting since they still dont know each other and aladdin too so this is alot before any dangerouis advanture jas or any body we know of went threw...getting very intresting ..cant wait !

~DB92

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! it\'s always nice to hear from my readers :)

Reviewer: DesertBloom92 Anonymous Date: 07/22/06 - 08:59AM Title: Chapter 1: New Rules, New Life

I love your stories and Im ganna lovethis one too!this was a creative Idea to write a story about. poor jas..its sad this was RIGHT before she met aladdin so looks like aladdin wont be involved in this story..but I hope in some way you can involve aladdin in here then some romance blooming in a way..like maybe aladdin gets capured too becomes a slave meets jas or ..I dont know what would happen but what ever you do I know it would be AWESOME!

~DB92

Author's Response: hey you\'ve given me some great ideas :) maybe you\'ll see them in the story. thanks for the fabulous reviews, it helps inspire me-lol