I really love the story, it is romantic and adventurous, just how I like it. I loved the characters you made up, especially the elmps (is that how it's spelled? sorry if i got that wrong). I love it, really. You are a great writer!
Will you update more chapters?
Thanks for writing this! 10/10
i do like aladdin and his friends but can you put more thing's in to it
p.s i been wathing to much viva la bam and sailor moon
Author's Response: I'm still going!
And Viva la Bam lives in my hometown :)
I like this chapter. It keeps up the suspense... and it takes the story into an interesting turn. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Oh, Merci! I've got the next chapter ready! You should get it soon!
Oh, I like this chapter. It's longer, and a bit more interesting. I can't wait for the action to start, however. Keep going... it's gettin' good.
Author's Response: Action is coming... Next chapter... Thanks for the review!
Great next two chapters Meesh, but the suspense is getting overwhelming. I need more action in the chapters... either that, or do more chapters at once. Can't leave us hangin' for too long!! Can't wait to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thank you muchly! I feel bad for all the waiting I put you guys through, but I dont get much computer time because I share the computer with five + people! I'll try hard to not keep you hanging.
This is ery interesting. Please update soon
Author's Response: thanks!
~mEeSh >
I like how it's coming along. Please update!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Again, I'm sorry I've been so slow... It's a whole bunch of long stories. If you get bored, read some of my other finished stories! Thanks, Meesh >
Oh, please finish this soon!!! It's got a VERY interesting plot line, and I'm glad you took my advice about the whole "Iago situation"...
Meg
Author's Response: I'm glad you gave it to me! I was losing my mind! (ppl reading this besides MM and me, just dont ask.)
ANd thanks for the review!
short chapters but a great story so far. The waiting part is killing me Please update soon.Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Sorry about the wait. With my busy-ness, the quickest way I can update it is to do a little bit at a time. ^_^. Glad you like it! Thanks for the review, and keep reading!
Good story. I can't wait to read what happens next! please update soon.
Author's Response: Hey thanks! Sorry a)the chapters are short and b) its taking a while to post. I actually wrote this story a while ago, and I have to change it because i stunk back then. lol.
Thanks for the review, and keep reading!
Wow... very short chapter... but it does add to the suspense. Can't wait for the next one. Seeing how you've already written the story, you may wanna put your new characters through a "MARY SUE LITMUS TEST" just to be safe.
Author's Response: Yeah sorry it was so short... I hope Damali's "Mary Sue-ness" isn't bad...
Hmm... and the suspense continues. I'm liking your two new characters, they're turning out to be quite awesome.
Author's Response: Three new characters! (Damali, Pichi, and Matsu.) I'm glad you like it/them! Thanks for the review!
I liked the prologue Meesh. It gets me ready for the rest of the story. I can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Glad to hear that! Here comes the next part! Keep reading/reviewing! It's much appreciated!