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Princess Lydia
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I knew it Nez! About you know what!! 
Oh boy the stories getting good!!!
I can't wait till the next chapter is up you are a great author Nez!! 
Tell me when the next chapter is up don't worry I'll read it!! |
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Arrrrrg! The family computer is down and I can't be on the computer as often as I like to be.
I will finish this story even if it kills me!
Okay, maybe not that far. |
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Nez
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| Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 5:28 pm Post subject: |
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That was me above. Forgot to log in.
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Princess Lydia
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:22 pm Post subject: |
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Hey Nez is the next chapter up yet I mean it has been a while!  Sorry if this comes as a blow but I am so excited about the story I would love to hear the next chapter!!  |
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Nez
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:36 pm Post subject: |
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Don't worry.
I'm getting it done.
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Nez
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:40 pm Post subject: |
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Chap. NINE is up...finally.
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Princess Lydia
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 7:47 pm Post subject: |
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| Oh thank you Nez!! *hugs* *then goes off to read the new chapter* |
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Princess Lydia
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| Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 8:01 pm Post subject: |
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| Nicely done Nez I loved it keep up the good work!! |
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Nez
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| Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2005 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, I'm almost done with the next chapter, but now I have another question about characterization.
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“Good, very good.”
“Good,” the eel gurgled, “boy do good.”
“I’m not a boy,” Dhandi stated, glaring at the eel. “I’m a girl. Girl.”
“Boy,” Xerxes smirked obstinately.
“Girrrrrl,” Dhandi enunciated.
“Booooooy.” The eel chuckled as Dhandi frowned and returned to her mage light which had grown to the size of a kickball to her shock. She shook it off and it hovered in place a few inches in front of her. |
Tell what needs to be changed. It's in your hand to make sure I don't screw up. *makes spooky sounds*
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Princess Lydia
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| Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 5:56 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm it is good but Dhandi doesn't seem the type to act so rude! Though I think you should keep it! It is very funny!  |
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Nez
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| Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks.
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Princess Lydia
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| Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 6:02 pm Post subject: |
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| Your oh so very welcome!! |
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Nez
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| Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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Chap. 10 is up!
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Nez
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| Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, a bit side-tracked by other things, but I'm trying to write the next chapter.
So to tide you over until I finally post it, another picture, this time of Dhandi and Amir/Mozenrath. Enjoy.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2005 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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| Oooh, fire |
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